AND WHEN YOU'RE GONE...
People would rush to your timeline
Reviewing your previous speeches
Reminiscing about your laudable works
But the greatest of all would be "Disbelief".
No this isn't real!
Tell me it's a lie they'd say
Asking for affirmations to soothe their sawed heart
Only that day shall men become philosophers.
They'd question "God WHY"
What's life if full of pain,
We've no time to rest nor gain
No time to check on any, the least we squeeze.
And when you watch people suck their last,
Right in front of you and news journey around,
Take notes of how it's done,
For same shall replicate when you're gone👌
You're talented to have written such a beautiful poem. The poem is well-crafted, with a clear structure and rhyme scheme.
ReplyDeleteThe imagery is vivid and evocative, and the emotions expressed are powerful and moving. Overall, it's a wonderful poem, and I'm sure everyone will connect to this in various dimensions.